Can anyone be so perfect?


I am was left speechless,
so wordless
I died to see him
He is so perfect.

He ruled my thoughts
Overtook my mind
Controlled my heart
with every beat that strikes

I kept on denying
This cannot be happening
I may lose some words for him to describe

Perfect is always beautiful, so he is too
Capable of making me smile in his absence
But, he doesn’t know that he could
His memories are less, still unending
Even if he left me many times in dismay
I have wondered how I can make him surprised

I can never think of trouble him
though he has done it several times
From short tempered at precluding stuff
Towards him, I always pardoned and became fine

I knew, he will never bother to keep me
As I do towards him
Because classic is found so rare
I cannot risk missing it

In my struggle to keep him by my side
Indeed, he has tried getting away
I remember those tears that left my eyes
When last time he has asked me to stop to speak
This was so difficult, I knew
I would text him another day

I reversed my thoughts to the back
Where my self-respect was my superiority
He may be absolute for his tail of friends
To whom he keeps on pampering
I promised myself if this is what you want
I cannot risk my morale around
Then no problem, I have so many friends as stranger
You’ll be the next mysterious stranger in the town.

12 Comments Add yours

  1. shonessa says:

    Is it just a poem or you actually have someone like that?πŸ˜‰πŸ˜πŸ˜

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    1. rakhioverhere says:

      Hahaha…..This is from my experience. Each and every word is from my life.

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      1. shonessa says:

        Ohhhh really?? That’s wonderful!!πŸ˜πŸ˜‰πŸ’«

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      2. rakhioverhere says:

        Yeah am glad. But, I don’t want anyone to have this experience. 😊😊😊

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      3. shonessa says:

        Oh! But nvm, everyone has a bad moment and experience. Don’t worry. I hope everything is well now?

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      4. rakhioverhere says:

        Yes. Everything is well 😊😊😊 thank you.

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  2. shonessa says:


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  3. Very touching. You’re drawn into the lists and fears that can so overwhelm in the face of perceived perfection. Really well put together!

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    1. rakhioverhere says:

      Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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    1. rakhioverhere says:

      Thank you πŸ™‚

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